A group of 14 published mystery/suspense authors run a blog site called The Kill Zone. Last month, they asked readers to submit the first page of their novel for critique by one of the 14. I submitted the first page of my WIP, Cassandra’s Curse. Check it out! It’s the April 13th post. The reviewer brought up some great points, but the comments left by other authors just tripled the fun for me.
Here’s the address: http://killzoneauthors.blogspot.com/